Page 20 is actually an addition the original story. I felt like I needed a quiet scene between my hero and his mentor. This may sound corny, but a child’s belief in you is very powerful. To a child, an adult is a fearsome and powerful thing to behold. This is a lesson I have learned very recently as a parent.
This page is also 100% digital, a first for me.
Enjoy!
PS.
After sleeping on it, I decided to re-letter this page. I think you’ll agree it flows better and is easier to read.